The Amazing Spiderman

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Post by Tronhitman »

Done ? Or anything else need added or changed :chin:
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I think you should justify the synopsis and im really not a fan of text over images.
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Why whats wrong with text, are you referring to the length? as for the text over gwens hair i can change that but if thats the case i need to really sort her hair as this was my first time cutting out hair by masking
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Yeah, I bet that's what Bisky was thinking about. It'll look much better if you kept the text away from her hair.
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Okay back to the drawing board on this masking luckily all i have to mask is the pony tail :chin:
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It does look cluttered around her hair :( move the synopsis up and form it Around her hair (and maybe shrink the Taglines,) and take more time on the SF box. There is a lot of room on the left side and it's crammed on the right side of the box. Play around with it and Gwen can have some breathing room :)
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Update

shrunk synopsis
move special features to the left and shrunk
played around with gwens hair
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TT on the front seems to be moved to far to the left. :)
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No Problem OH ;)
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Update

moved "amazing" on TT over to the left to centre
moved the whole TT over a little to the right
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