Buried

[venome]

possibly worth a shot m8 yeah

[Paris]

Darken The legal area maybe?

[Krabban]

I start to get really satisfied with this piece of work here.

I've darken it a little bit more, I also added more grunge and noise to get a more realistic feeling. I've put some light source on the spine logo to.

I can try to darken the legals just to see how it looks.

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[M0vieM0nster]

I don't think 'Ryan Reynolds' needs to be so big at the top! A very very well done though for being soooooo creative with this I think you could tone down the glow from the phone too? At the mo for me it is distracting from the TT and i think the TT should be the main centre of attention. One other thing is that while i do love the TT, i can't help but ask myself... where is the light coming from? A Torch maybe? I can't remember the film well enough but there must be something you can add?

[Krabban]

QUOTE (M0vieM0nster @ Apr 1 2012, 08:13 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

I don't think 'Ryan Reynolds' needs to be so big at the top! A very very well done though for being soooooo creative with this I think you could tone down the glow from the phone too? At the mo for me it is distracting from the TT and i think the TT should be the main centre of attention. One other thing is that while i do love the TT, i can't help but ask myself... where is the light coming from? A Torch maybe? I can't remember the film well enough but there must be something you can add?

I have decreased the size of "Ryan Reynolds" and as you are saying - "tone down the light from the phone" to make the TT more eye-catching.

The light is just for bringing out details. But now when say it, he has a flashlight and a green snap light. I think I will add the flashlight together with the clock, the mobile and the zippo to fulfill everything. I think it will be to much objects if I add a flashlight with every light source.

I give it a try, but I have my vision.

[Sxxo]

Looks great Krabban