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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2012 9:48 pm
by yesheman
Better?
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2012 10:07 pm
by Paris
WAAAAAAAAY better
try left-aligned rather than justified text to avoid holes in the synopsis.
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2012 10:14 pm
by jwshaw89
Even better, just play with the letter spacing to close up some of those holes.
Specifically, try and get the '(Matt' to spill over onto the next line, and tighten up the line beginning 'Despite their differences' so that 'determination' fits on it.
Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2012 12:01 am
by Nightrider
I like the back layout but do agree with JR about the fonts.
I might suggest making the SF are a little smaller which would give the synopsis are a little more breathing room.
I like post 22 with the horses in the background, if they were a bit darker I think they would have some nice impact, and those characters are a big part of TRUE GRIT, it's not all Rooster

But that does become a personal choice to have them or not.
UM WOW! I just posted and saw your update, looks really good!

Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2012 7:26 am
by Zungam
Very nice update!
Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2012 11:01 am
by sauron
I like the layout of the new update but not too keen on the image. Looks like he is having a wee.
Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2012 11:55 am
by JollyRoger
Can't wait to see that synopsis even better!
Rest looks nice

Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2012 12:10 pm
by Nightrider
sauron wrote:I like the layout of the new update but not too keen on the image. Looks like he is having a wee.
MATT DAMON !
Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2012 12:15 pm
by JollyRoger
sauron wrote:Looks like he is having a wee.
Yea LOL looks like he's the 'Elephant Man' with a big trunk!

Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2012 12:46 pm
by yesheman
JollyRoger wrote:Can't wait to see that synopsis even better!
Rest looks nice
Will change the synopsis, update later today!