Machine Gun Preacher

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JollyRoger
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A little less bullet holes, as suggested by Darren, and perhaps have them all at the same size? If the holes were made by the same machine gun, it would be logical if they all shared the same calibre. ;)
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What JR said. Altho i guess it's a texture you've used? So making them all the same size could take some time, I also feel they should be a tiny bit bigger.
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Top job!!

I suggest boosting the saturation on the colored text on the front and darkening it slightly. Also, how left arm is way too bright and seems like it's not attached to him? His left arm should be as dark as his right arm or his neck
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Like it A Lot!
I actually think I like the image in post 24 (i think it was), just with the plain white, grey background. Really simplistic. It just pops. It also would then contrast with the back cover really well i think...
Great job!
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