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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 3:25 pm
by felipe-11
Nice update! I love the window, very clever!
I don't mind the green smoke, I recall it being a bit green too, but if you decide to go back to white smoke you could change the background wall to match the color in the film more, I believe it was a brownish or yellowish wall, that should help make the white smoke stand out.
I really like where this is headed!
Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 4:00 pm
by Zungam
Thanks guys! I seem to have forgotten many details from the movie, colours etc, so I had to download a TS (shame on me!!). You're right about the wall colour, felipe. I'll try to match it better.
After seeing the movie for the second time, I got some inspiration for the back as well
Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 4:49 pm
by quilva
Zungam wrote:Thanks guys! I seem to have forgotten many details from the movie, colours etc, so I had to download a TS (shame on me!!). You're right about the wall colour, felipe. I'll try to match it better.
After seeing the movie for the second time, I got some inspiration for the back as well
same just got back from seeing it for the 1st time and got some ideas on mine, sadly youve used the 'Home' on one of yours like i was thinking
great covers m8, there is no green tinge to the smoke its like a browny grey btw
Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 6:39 pm
by Zungam
Thanks mate, feel free to use the drawing
It's not like I've copyrighted the idea...
Added some brown to the wall and changed the smoke to white/grey. The combination brown wall/greenish smoke didn't look good. Now I'll concentrate on the back...
Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 7:17 pm
by JollyRoger
Much better imo :thumbsup:
Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 7:52 pm
by clark_ckcstm
great update!
Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 8:16 pm
by JollyRoger
Perhaps try out to shrink the larger words in the spine TT; seems a tad too overlarge
Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 9:54 pm
by sauron
Looking a lot better but I'm sure the wall wasn't that brown me being a bit picky, sure it looked more like this... Not as brown.
Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 10:32 am
by Nightrider
Have to agree, looks much better, great stuff, this is a winner
Posted: Tue Aug 16, 2011 11:46 am
by Demonology
Looking great so far... Do agree with JR about the title on the spine it does look to big, i'd reduce the size to around 50 - 60%
This is a serious contender for cover of the month