Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles Covers

Post by **sauron** » Thu Aug 11, 2011 11:25 am

Not too sure if it's just me but the text doesn't look like it's the same angle as the metal thing.

Zungam · Post by **Zungam** » Thu Aug 11, 2011 11:26 am

My thought as well. Looks like it's tiltet a bit too much. 0,5 -1 degrees or something, not much but noticeable.

Paris · Post by **Paris** » Thu Aug 11, 2011 2:45 pm

Thanks guys, I think the rivets at the top of the box are slightly off throwing off the text, I'll do my best to fix it. Ark and Felipe, The quote spacing between the quote and name of writer will be increased, I'll move "radical" down a bit then center the text vertically so spacing problems should be fixed.

Paris · Post by **Paris** » Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:02 pm

Better???
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Arkflip · Post by **Arkflip** » Thu Aug 11, 2011 5:57 pm

I think the issue is the amount of text you have. Maybe removing the 2nd quote will work better. You'll have enough space to work the top quote, the synopsis and the features.

LittleCoolDude · Post by **LittleCoolDude** » Thu Aug 11, 2011 6:44 pm

I think it looks off b/c the rivets on the side are straight up and down, I would just remove them and have the rivets going left to right

Paris · Post by **Paris** » Fri Aug 12, 2011 3:53 pm

I'll se what i can do

Paris · Post by **Paris** » Thu Aug 18, 2011 6:48 pm

Update, Better?????
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Post by **Kernie** » Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:42 pm

I think it's better! Just move all the text (quote, synopsis, and features) up about 5-10 pixels. There seems to be more room at the top of the metal box than at the bottom, try to center it vertically a little more. This is a supremely minor nitpick, though...

LittleCoolDude · Post by **LittleCoolDude** » Thu Aug 18, 2011 7:56 pm

yes much better! I also agree with kernie's suggestion

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