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Post by sauron »

Not too sure if it's just me but the text doesn't look like it's the same angle as the metal thing.
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My thought as well. Looks like it's tiltet a bit too much. 0,5 -1 degrees or something, not much but noticeable.
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Post by Paris »

Thanks guys, I think the rivets at the top of the box are slightly off throwing off the text, I'll do my best to fix it. Ark and Felipe, The quote spacing between the quote and name of writer will be increased, I'll move "radical" down a bit then center the text vertically so spacing problems should be fixed.
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Better???
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Post by Arkflip »

I think the issue is the amount of text you have. Maybe removing the 2nd quote will work better. You'll have enough space to work the top quote, the synopsis and the features.
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I think it looks off b/c the rivets on the side are straight up and down, I would just remove them and have the rivets going left to right :)
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I'll se what i can do ;)
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Update, Better?????
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Post by Kernie »

I think it's better! Just move all the text (quote, synopsis, and features) up about 5-10 pixels. There seems to be more room at the top of the metal box than at the bottom, try to center it vertically a little more. This is a supremely minor nitpick, though... :D
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Post by LittleCoolDude »

yes much better! I also agree with kernie's suggestion ;)
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