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Posted: Mon May 11, 2020 7:29 pm
by ctaulbee
I'd follow Kernie's layout at the top and then extend the legal stuff across the bottom like normal, I can't see a reason to have it cramped up at the right like that myself, just makes for dead space on the left for no reason.
Posted: Tue May 12, 2020 9:47 am
by TXron
Okay, thanks guys. Right here's a new update based on everybody's feedback.
Update
*Coloured the still more orange and lighten a tad
*Reposition the credits center at the bottom
*changed the layout for both Special features and synopsis
*added critic review
Posted: Tue May 12, 2020 9:58 am
by TXron
Okay really didn't like the original synopsis, felt to short so got another one
Posted: Tue May 12, 2020 12:04 pm
by bazzah
I really like it. Great job buddy!
Posted: Tue May 12, 2020 3:51 pm
by ctaulbee
Looks good, probably could have left the Legal text smaller, it would have been less lines that way and the billing would have had room to come down and expand too.
Posted: Tue May 12, 2020 6:58 pm
by sauron
This is looking a lot better now!
I’m not keen on the credits being right aligned, I feel they should be spanned the same width as the legals and the critic quote a bit bigger. Another thing the synopsis font looks fairly small, maybe reduce the amount of text and increase the point size.
Ignore the badly cloned example below but I’m thinking something like the below.
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Posted: Wed May 13, 2020 10:14 am
by TXron
Update for today,
*critic review format has changed and size
*new synopsis
*Special features and image bar moved higher to make room for larger credits
*Larger credits
Posted: Wed May 13, 2020 11:26 am
by Kernie
Here’s my quick two cents...
- This is coming along nicely!
- Don’t wrap the synopsis around the barcode. Start the synopsis beneath the barcode.
- If the critic quote doesn’t fit the space properly... perhaps look for another one that will?
- Remove the billing block entirely, this would allow you to shift everything above it down and provide more room for those elements to breathe. It’s starting to feel very cluttered, particularly in the top half.
Posted: Wed May 13, 2020 11:39 am
by TXron
Kernie wrote:QUOTE (Kernie @ May 13 2020, 11:26 AM) Here’s my quick two cents...
- This is coming along nicely!
- Don’t wrap the synopsis around the barcode. Start the synopsis beneath the barcode.
- If the critic quote doesn’t fit the space properly... perhaps look for another one that will?
- Remove the billing block entirely, this would allow you to shift everything above it down and provide more room for those elements to breathe. It’s starting to feel very cluttered, particularly in the top half.
No Problem, quick questions whats the billing block?
Posted: Wed May 13, 2020 11:59 am
by Kernie
The credits are called a “billing block.â€