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Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2015 9:38 pm
by ctaulbee
You have done a great job on this Cirus, I do like sauron's suggestion on color
Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2015 9:24 am
by Arkflip
Great update! The coloring is great!
Only thing i can suggest is to remove the barcode black stroke and maybe reduce a bit the quote shadow.
Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2015 10:38 am
by Cirus
Thanks for the advice guys.
Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2015 5:31 pm
by Cirus
So what do you think? Any suggestions? I think there are too many white text on the first version, so I made another one with a little yellow.
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Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2015 6:23 pm
by bazzah
I think you have done another excellent job! I like the white text version myself
Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2015 6:32 pm
by Zungam
I'm leaning towards the second version I think. Both works though
The synopsis looks a little "heavy" imo. What's the current font size? What about reducing the text size by 0,5 and increase the spacing so the text would fill the same area?
Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2015 6:37 pm
by robe77
Amazing work!
Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2015 6:47 pm
by Paris
Maybe make each still on the back have the same blue tone as the bottom right one (while still keeping other colors for contrast like yellow, red, green, etc,)? I think that would make a stronger connection with the front and back color scheme.
Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2015 7:02 pm
by Cirus
Better?
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Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2015 7:13 pm
by sauron
That looks better to me! I think the yellow text version works best