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Very cool!

Could you try to move up the first (") in the quotes though (same height as the one in the end has)?
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I really like it! Excellent work mate :)

Thinking some orange could work well on the front as well?
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Thanks for the feedback. :)

Changed the (") as JR suggesed and some other small details.

Zungam wrote:
QUOTE (Zungam @ Aug 28 2014, 11:29 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Thinking some orange could work well on the front as well?


Yes, I thought the same. :)
Changed the color of "Mark Wahlberg" into this orange. I think I'll keep the tagline as it is.
With the blured effect JC has shown this works better. In orange it looks a little bit strange.

[attachment=29475:Back.jpg]

[attachment=29476:Front.jpg]

[attachment=29478:Cover.jpg]

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Back is very dark in comparison to the front
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You're right. The reason is the background behind the synopsis/SFs. It would be much brighter without.
Since I have screenshots there was no other area to place them.
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Great job mate :)
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I believe where there is a Christian... there is a way ;)
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You think I should change that? :chin:
Because to honest it doesn't really bother me that the back is darker than the front... :whistle:
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Great work on this, just noted your speech marks "" (anführungszeichen) are round the wrong way, they need swapping around ;)
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Fidi84 wrote:
QUOTE (Fidi84 @ Aug 29 2014, 08:30 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
You think I should change that? :chin:
Because to honest it doesn't really bother me that the back is darker than the front... :whistle:


I think it looks good as is. Even though the back is darker you still have a bright area near Wahlberg's arm.

Front looks even better now with the orange :)
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