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Posted: Tue Jul 09, 2013 11:10 am
by Matush
Very nice update, no suggestions from me, sorry
Posted: Thu Jul 11, 2013 4:05 pm
by pytlaczek
I think I finished the first part of the cover. If there is something to improve, let me know.
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Posted: Thu Jul 11, 2013 4:43 pm
by xshoty
great one bud !

Posted: Thu Jul 11, 2013 4:50 pm
by Matush
Good work.
Posted: Thu Jul 11, 2013 9:28 pm
by topmeasure
Looks gr8 m8!
Posted: Thu Jul 11, 2013 10:04 pm
by Bunny Dojo
You've got a really big, action-packed design on your hands here, sir!
For the front, would it work to move the design down a bit and added the title big up top? It seems to be getting a little lost in all of the excitement. Also, since you removed the other two guys from the front, maybe a conventional left-to-right listing of the guys' names would be the way to go instead of listing Murphy in the middle? (Or maybe just Murphy's name?)
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On the back, how would it look if you made the guys a bit smaller? Maybe 90% on Murphy and Ashton and 85% on Reinhold? I can really appreciate how much work you put into building that scene, plus the difficulty of using with images at different perspectives and fitting everything into the space in a certain way. You did a great job, but the guys in particular seem like they might be a bit big?
Posted: Sat Jul 13, 2013 6:23 am
by pytlaczek
Tim, really appreciate your suggestions. But why write it when the project is finite? But in order be taken into account, need to do the front again. And this is too complicated to do it all over again.
TT at the beginning of the project was at the top. Arrangement did not like it guys, and therefore has been changed. I will change what I can easy to change and I'll show.
I changed my surnames and I Shrunk Reinhold.
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Posted: Sat Jul 13, 2013 6:36 pm
by Bunny Dojo
pytlaczek wrote:Tim, really appreciate your suggestions. But why write it when the project is finite?
This was my first time seeing the design since all of the great new updates.
The composition has changed so much since when you had the title up top previously, it seemed like it might be worth trying it up there again. If it's not easy to move things down and extend the sky a little, or if the design is already all set, or if you don't like the title up top, then it's no big deal.

Posted: Sun Jul 14, 2013 4:39 am
by topmeasure
I agree, it definitely looks better withe the title up top.

Posted: Mon Jul 15, 2013 3:25 pm
by pytlaczek
Something like that? Decide which version.
As the tagline is bad, I'm waiting for suggestions.
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