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Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 9:21 pm
by venome
Just make the synopsis text a tiny bit smaller, this is looking good :)
play around with the sizes some more as suggested for a cleaner look

Posted: Thu Mar 14, 2013 9:59 pm
by venome
Try something like this... make the 2 shapes and place the smaller one on top of the larger one with inner shadow and the larger one with drop shadow.

[attachment=25059:SW_shapes.jpg]

[attachment=25060:rajd3r_s..._wars_cw.jpg]

Posted: Fri Mar 15, 2013 6:35 am
by rajd3r
Matush wrote:
QUOTE (Matush @ Mar 14 2013, 10:20 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I agree with JR

and for me, all of the text on the back is one big mess.


For me also, so don't worry i would change it anyway :)

venome wrote:
QUOTE (venome @ Mar 14 2013, 10:21 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Just make the synopsis text a tiny bit smaller, this is looking good :)
play around with the sizes some more as suggested for a cleaner look


No problem

venome wrote:
QUOTE (venome @ Mar 14 2013, 10:59 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Try something like this... make the 2 shapes and place the smaller one on top of the larger one with inner shadow and the larger one with drop shadow.

[attachment=25059:SW_shapes.jpg]

[attachment=25060:rajd3r_s..._wars_cw.jpg]


THanks m8 for advice. I'll try to make it better.
/rajd3r
PS I think the background doesn't match for this "box", does it? Maybe Universe or sth like that will be ok - the same situation in box background ... And font color - a lot of changes have to be done

Posted: Fri Mar 15, 2013 11:21 am
by Nightrider
main image could use a little level boost I think, also think that image could look good in a shape too, as if they were being watched through binocs by the enemy?

Posted: Fri Mar 15, 2013 11:53 am
by rajd3r
Nightrider wrote:
QUOTE (Nightrider @ Mar 15 2013, 12:21 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
main image could use a little level boost I think, also think that image could look good in a shape too, as if they were being watched through binocs by the enemy?

I thought about sth like that, but maybe similar to this:

/rajd3r

Posted: Fri Mar 15, 2013 11:59 am
by Nightrider
I think it could work mate

Posted: Sat Mar 30, 2013 7:01 pm
by rajd3r
I move on but i won't upload till i finish all, cause i don't want to give "small pieces" and make mess here ... anyway i have questions/requests:
1) Should i put the list of episodes? I mean:
1 - XXXXXX
2 - XXXXXX
Somewhere in the back. Or just put the tagline "Includes all 22 episodes" - as i did in previous post.
2) What do You think about font of this text "Include (...)", "Most powerfull" - this is Star Wars Font, but to me - it doesn't match. Do You have any suggestions about it? Or "replacement" font?
3) Do You think that the better way of back - cover - will be make it darker(black) with elemnts of Universe or sth like that witch white (shine) fonts - neons etc. Or as it is now - "sand" effects?
I think that's all for now
Thanks in advance for answering/help
/rajd3r

Posted: Thu Apr 11, 2013 9:47 am
by rajd3r
Update after while (sorry for long time ... )

Things that i'm still working on:
- in this "barcode"- or how to call this (where there are photos/text/etc) - i want to make those white lines better - i thought about mettalic effect
- "Includes 22 episodes" - i'm thinking about changing this text or move it up ... don't know
/rajd3r
Thanks for help/advices.

Posted: Thu Apr 11, 2013 11:27 am
by JollyRoger
I like it! :)

But I find your synopsis still needs some tweaking. Try to have the same amount of free space all around it. You may have to make the text a little smaller (font size)

Posted: Thu Apr 11, 2013 11:56 am
by rajd3r
I'm not sure if i understand You.
You want me to move a little this general text from borders?
/rajd3r