Star Wars THe Clone Wars

[venome]

Just make the synopsis text a tiny bit smaller, this is looking good
play around with the sizes some more as suggested for a cleaner look

[venome]

Try something like this... make the 2 shapes and place the smaller one on top of the larger one with inner shadow and the larger one with drop shadow.

[attachment=25059:SW_shapes.jpg]

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[rajd3r]

QUOTE (Matush @ Mar 14 2013, 10:20 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

I agree with JR

and for me, all of the text on the back is one big mess.

For me also, so don't worry i would change it anyway

QUOTE (venome @ Mar 14 2013, 10:21 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Just make the synopsis text a tiny bit smaller, this is looking good
play around with the sizes some more as suggested for a cleaner look

No problem

QUOTE (venome @ Mar 14 2013, 10:59 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

Try something like this... make the 2 shapes and place the smaller one on top of the larger one with inner shadow and the larger one with drop shadow.

[attachment=25059:SW_shapes.jpg]

[attachment=25060:rajd3r_s..._wars_cw.jpg]

THanks m8 for advice. I'll try to make it better.
/rajd3r
PS I think the background doesn't match for this "box", does it? Maybe Universe or sth like that will be ok - the same situation in box background ... And font color - a lot of changes have to be done

[Nightrider]

main image could use a little level boost I think, also think that image could look good in a shape too, as if they were being watched through binocs by the enemy?

[rajd3r]

QUOTE (Nightrider @ Mar 15 2013, 12:21 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>

main image could use a little level boost I think, also think that image could look good in a shape too, as if they were being watched through binocs by the enemy?

I thought about sth like that, but maybe similar to this:

/rajd3r

[Nightrider]

I think it could work mate

[rajd3r]

I move on but i won't upload till i finish all, cause i don't want to give "small pieces" and make mess here ... anyway i have questions/requests:
1) Should i put the list of episodes? I mean:
1 - XXXXXX
2 - XXXXXX
Somewhere in the back. Or just put the tagline "Includes all 22 episodes" - as i did in previous post.
2) What do You think about font of this text "Include (...)", "Most powerfull" - this is Star Wars Font, but to me - it doesn't match. Do You have any suggestions about it? Or "replacement" font?
3) Do You think that the better way of back - cover - will be make it darker(black) with elemnts of Universe or sth like that witch white (shine) fonts - neons etc. Or as it is now - "sand" effects?
I think that's all for now
Thanks in advance for answering/help
/rajd3r

[rajd3r]

Update after while (sorry for long time ... )

Things that i'm still working on:
- in this "barcode"- or how to call this (where there are photos/text/etc) - i want to make those white lines better - i thought about mettalic effect
- "Includes 22 episodes" - i'm thinking about changing this text or move it up ... don't know
/rajd3r
Thanks for help/advices.

[JollyRoger]

I like it!

But I find your synopsis still needs some tweaking. Try to have the same amount of free space all around it. You may have to make the text a little smaller (font size)

[rajd3r]

I'm not sure if i understand You.
You want me to move a little this general text from borders?
/rajd3r