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Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2013 11:41 pm
by easylife
adjusted the colours

@ JR, didnt really want jack any bigger as he will end up of the bottom of the cover

Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2013 1:50 am
by venome
Nice work EL ;)

Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2013 2:54 am
by wysmommy
Very nice. :thumb:

Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2013 3:21 am
by Kernie
Nice work, EL! :D

Name text on the front gets a little lost with the busy background, and the Jack Frost front image has a lot of negative space around that draws my attention right to the white clouds. Not sure if there's a way to fix that depending on the keyart, but it might look better to switch the top and bottom images around.

Back layout looks smashing and I like the overall colorful design! :thumb:

Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2013 11:50 pm
by easylife
Cheers guys, swapped around some characters on the front and made north spread across the other two bottom sections, did a bit with the features on the back

Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2013 12:44 am
by venome
Looks way better now m8, although the names are a little harder to read :)

Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2013 6:53 am
by Nightrider
yes yes looks very good, nice and vibrant, snazzy layout, great execcution mate

Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2013 7:07 pm
by easylife
cheers guys.

sorted the names and tinkered about a bit, on to the legals next

Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2013 8:35 pm
by JollyRoger
spine looks a lot better now bud - the gradient really helps! :)

Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2013 10:09 am
by Nightrider
looking pretty good to go to me mate