Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 12:52 pm
kernie82 wrote:QUOTE (kernie82 @ Aug 4 2012, 02:50 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>In your tagline on the back, make the word "THE" the size of the world "UNTOLD" and make "UNTOLD" the size of "THE." Basically, just switch 'em.
In title treatments, headlines, or any other instance, "THE" should never be one of the words you emphasize. It's a nothing word.
Agreed.
A Nothing word?
Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 1:04 pm
JollyRoger wrote:QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Aug 4 2012, 08:52 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>A Nothing word?
Not really, I just made it up. I forget what part of speech "the" is... it's not a noun, verb, or adjective. Is it a definite/indefinite article? I can't remember...
Basically, any words that are practically meaningless all by themselves (a, an, the, of, is) should never be larger than words that actually mean something (story, untold, begins, amazing, spider-man).
Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 6:23 pm
UPDATE
Posted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 9:49 pm
looks better. Remember to keep the text aligned (Tagline/synopsis)
Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 5:22 pm
Hi Jolly roger can you please explain :duh: , do you want me to allign the bottom of the tagline on the back so it is straight
Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2012 4:20 pm
I want you to align the 'The Untold Story' tagline with the left side of the synopsis.
Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2012 4:31 pm
Also, can you increase the curves of the two characters on the back to match the front? They seem a little too dark
Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2012 5:45 pm
Update, as you requested 
Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2012 6:30 pm
I think the actor's names on the front are too hard to see. How about moving them to the top?
Posted: Mon Aug 06, 2012 6:41 pm
Update