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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 1:18 am
by Nightrider
Cheers buddy
On the 4th element, the one with the floating stones? Have you thought of having them larger, or more of them, just so they reach the same heights as the water air and fire? Just thinking it would give a bit more overall balance mate? And possibly some of the stones could encroche into the fire , like how you have with the water going into the air and air into the fire?
Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 7:25 pm
by delek
Thanks NR, trying.
Started back, front not finish, not quite like the arrangement of actors names :chin: , unless I change it
I forgot to remove elements from the girl, for now will let them be
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Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 7:57 pm
by Zungam
Not liking the colors under the credits and legals. Maybe it would look better with purple/blue?
I'm curious to see the layout on your back. Seems like you might end up with a space issue
Posted: Wed May 09, 2012 8:52 pm
by Sxxo
Zungam wrote:Not liking the colors under the credits and legals. Maybe it would look better with purple/blue?
Agree.
For the front names, i suggest a classic type: 1st name on 2nd (like batman begins/dark knight retail art) in white.
Posted: Sun May 13, 2012 7:41 pm
by delek
Thanks guys, i'm trying white actors names and not match IMO, stay in yellow.
Update, small changes, I hope for the better.
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2012 7:43 pm
by Paris
Not sure about the colorful spine because I like the yellow on black TT on the front, but I really like it so far!!
Posted: Mon May 14, 2012 2:13 am
by Nightrider
Posted: Mon May 14, 2012 7:49 am
by JollyRoger
Posted: Mon May 14, 2012 7:36 pm
by delek
Thanks guys, changed spine, added "guy"? on back.
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Posted: Mon May 14, 2012 9:03 pm
by Zungam
Spine looks much better now and the back is coming along nicely. Not sold on the synopsis though... Seems a bit misplaced up there, but might look better when you fill in the rest
Edit: typo...