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Post by RookerDesigns »

Here is an update...

Any changes?



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Post by ShokXoneStudios »

The sky looks a lot better.

Here's an idea that I think could really make this thing pop. At the edges of the characters, where there's a bright highlight (i.e. the side of Kick-a$$' and his left shoulder), try adding a small paint splatter effect, kind of like what I've done below. Just my interpretation, totally your choice to ignore.
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Post by RookerDesigns »

I think it looks amazing.. I was staying away from paint splatter due to the fact that it has been done ALOT... But what you just did looks really good...


What do you think about the smoke behind mini Kick-a$$?

Also, Imma try and Paint a version with Kick-a$$ in his civilian Clothes like you said.. I got an idea. Like a picture of him walking or something.. Sounds boring, but might look nice....
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Update

What do you guys think.. Him Walking? or him in the Kick-a$$ Suit again?

Thanks Shok for the Help..


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Post by M0vieM0nster »

What about making him a little bigger?
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Post by Paris »

Looks good! I agree with Movie, you should make Dave bigger
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Post by ShokXoneStudios »

I prefer the last version with mini Kick-a$$; the coloring and lighting are bolder. The black space above him, then...are they maybe shots of Lyndsy Fonseca and/or Mark Strong's character that could be positioned in there?

Also (you're gonna kick MY a$$ after all this, aren't you?) the TT...the paint splatter effect on there is becoming too much for me. Try redoing it in the style on the trailer logo, like so:
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Post by Punisherchad »

I like him standing over the guy more, I also like that you were staying away from the paint splatter. Also, can't is a contraction, even when it's in all caps :)
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Post by voetzoeker »

Looking real good, but i prefer the one with the mini kick-a$$ too :)

Also feel that the black gab in the middle is to big maybe fill it with kick-a$$ pointing his finger ?

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Post by ShokXoneStudios »

Hmm, voetzoeker might be onto something there.
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