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Looking sweet Andy. I really like where this is going!
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Thanks, JR! :thumb: :thumb:

Just some minor tweaks...

- Adjusted some levels/saturation/etc.
- Added one of Whiplash's whips (I'm going with the blue whips that appear at the end of Iron Man 2, as opposed to his earlier yellow whips)
- Darkened the shadows on Red Skull's face

Nothing too earth-shattering, but I wanted to inch this one a little further along before returning to other work for a while...

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Perhaps for your next update darken the no copy logo? The light blue is quite stark IMO.
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JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Apr 20 2012, 10:56 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Perhaps for your next update darken the no copy logo? The light blue is quite stark IMO.

Pay no attention the legals at this point... they're just a placeholder taken from a scan of the Captain America blu-ray (I inverted it so it would be white text, which is why the no-copy logo is now blue). I just haven't found the time or ambition to recreate the legals properly yet. :D :D :D

When I get around to it, the legals will be the same gray color as the text on the front (maybe even slightly darker).
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JollyRoger wrote:
QUOTE (JollyRoger @ Apr 21 2012, 12:56 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Perhaps for your next update darken the no copy logo? The light blue is quite stark IMO.

I just applaud JR for working the word STARK into this thread :) well done sir
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truly amazing!
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Great back so far!

I noticed you stopped the villains at the edge of the border, but on the front the elements go past the frame. Have you tried that with the ones on the back as well?
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bpmford wrote:
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I noticed you stopped the villains at the edge of the border, but on the front the elements go past the frame. Have you tried that with the ones on the back as well?

I'll try that, but I do want the rubble and sparks to get cut off by bottom of the frame (above the legals), so I'm still mulling over how to handle that... :D
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I wonder how it would work if you were able to have some Whiplash'es whip breaking the border, Loki's horn tip is and it might work well with symmetry?
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Post by ShokXoneStudios »

I'd say give the Whiplash coil more of a curl like a cat's tail, and have it pass behind Loki and in front of Red Skull.
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