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Posted: Sat May 10, 2025 3:45 pm
by JollyRoger
Just a matter of darkening the foreground, really.
Hows this?
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2025 5:01 pm
by Bunny Dojo
JollyRoger wrote:QUOTE (JollyRoger @ May 10 2025, 09:47 AM) Think the back is done.
The back looks fantastic!
The front has a nice impact, but it doesn't quite feel threatening yet. Maybe the stickers are a bit too bright white and happy? Or maybe the stickers are too big? Or maybe the box's back and right flaps are too bright? I can't quite pin down what it is, but there's something preventing it from fully feeling like a movie prop rather than clip art, and if you can find that extra adjustment the front would probably look as fantastic as your back cover.
Another option might be to zoom in even further and do something like the old Fight Club special edition, where the front is the box:
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2025 5:13 pm
by JollyRoger
Bunny Dojo wrote:QUOTE (Bunny Dojo @ May 10 2025, 07:01 PM) The back looks fantastic!
The front has a nice impact, but it doesn't quite feel threatening yet. Maybe the stickers are a bit too bright white and happy? Or maybe the stickers are too big? Or maybe the box's back and right flaps are too bright? I can't quite pin down what it is, but there's something preventing it from fully feeling like a movie prop rather than clip art, and if you can find that extra adjustment the front would probably look as fantastic as your back cover.
Another option might be to zoom in even further and do something like the old Fight Club special edition, where the front is the box:
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Ok, Darkened the stickers - and the box itself - plus darkened the back flaps as well. Is this better then?
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2025 7:27 pm
by M0vieM0nster
Looks great, with the front how about taking a slight bit of the vibrance and saturation away just to tone it down a bit?
Posted: Sat May 10, 2025 7:29 pm
by M0vieM0nster
on the box i mean
Posted: Sat May 10, 2025 7:40 pm
by JollyRoger
M0vieM0nster wrote:QUOTE (M0vieM0nster @ May 10 2025, 09:29 PM) on the box i mean
Ok, toned it done some.
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Posted: Sat May 10, 2025 8:49 pm
by JollyRoger
Wrapping this up