Just a matter of darkening the foreground, really.
Hows this?
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The back looks fantastic!JollyRoger wrote:QUOTE (JollyRoger @ May 10 2025, 09:47 AM) Think the back is done.
The front has a nice impact, but it doesn't quite feel threatening yet. Maybe the stickers are a bit too bright white and happy? Or maybe the stickers are too big? Or maybe the box's back and right flaps are too bright? I can't quite pin down what it is, but there's something preventing it from fully feeling like a movie prop rather than clip art, and if you can find that extra adjustment the front would probably look as fantastic as your back cover.
Another option might be to zoom in even further and do something like the old Fight Club special edition, where the front is the box:
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Bunny Dojo wrote:QUOTE (Bunny Dojo @ May 10 2025, 07:01 PM) The back looks fantastic!
The front has a nice impact, but it doesn't quite feel threatening yet. Maybe the stickers are a bit too bright white and happy? Or maybe the stickers are too big? Or maybe the box's back and right flaps are too bright? I can't quite pin down what it is, but there's something preventing it from fully feeling like a movie prop rather than clip art, and if you can find that extra adjustment the front would probably look as fantastic as your back cover.
Another option might be to zoom in even further and do something like the old Fight Club special edition, where the front is the box:
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Ok, Darkened the stickers - and the box itself - plus darkened the back flaps as well. Is this better then?
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Ok, toned it done some.M0vieM0nster wrote:QUOTE (M0vieM0nster @ May 10 2025, 09:29 PM) on the box i mean
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