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Posted: Sun Dec 29, 2024 10:44 pm
by Sxxo
Thanks for the tips. I will try them
The yellow colour in my sony vaio looks mutch better and bright...

Posted: Sun Jan 12, 2025 7:30 pm
by Sxxo
Persuting JR tip about the main character should be more visible, i found an image of the "mariner".
So i'm testing the perpective, place and size.
I had to move the text a bit, so i haven't try yet a diferrent yellow or a shade, like JR said.
I plan to put 2 screen on the right.
Posted: Sun Jan 12, 2025 7:40 pm
by bazzah
This looks a lot better. The other version was very cluttered on the back, imo. I like Costner on the jet ski

Posted: Sun Jan 12, 2025 11:13 pm
by Bunny Dojo
It's great to see you returning to this one, Sxxo!
For the back, what if you were to put the "Disc Two" text on the left and "Disc Three" text stacked on the right, and put the Costner picture in the center?
Or, maybe you can move the entire waterline (including the front image) down a little bit, just to give yourself some extra room to space out the text?
For the front, maybe you can center "Kevin Costner" and split the tagline onto 3 lines? (Beyond the horizon // Lies the secret // To a new beginning)
Or, maybe try the tagline up top in your dark blue?
Your imagery creates a great sense of epic scale, but the text is kind of crowded and tight.
Posted: Mon Jan 13, 2025 9:50 am
by JollyRoger
Maybe leave out the ´watch anywhere´banner and instead have the row of stills?
I would make Costner bigger.
Remember to have the movie name in yellow, in the credits block.
Keep it up!
Posted: Mon Jan 13, 2025 11:16 am
by bazzah
Posted: Mon Jan 13, 2025 3:32 pm
by bankska22
Coming together nicely.
Posted: Tue Jan 14, 2025 6:29 pm
by Fidi
What they said, the image of Costner should be big er compared to.your scene in the front.
And I also agree it's a bit to much texts and maybe leave some on the back and add a few morgen images instead.
Keep it going, I think that's the right direction and I really like that built scenery in the front.

Posted: Tue Jan 14, 2025 7:22 pm
by Sxxo
That's a lot of great tips that i gona try
Thanks to all, for your time
