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thanks i gotta get photoshop again when I get internet
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ok this is what I have came up with now.
Added a texture to the background
Fixed the synopsis
Lightened the shadow on the logo as best I could
Oh and turned border black instead of a dim black
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Post by sauron »

Looks much better now but the indent of "In this Disney" draws my attention, would be better if it starts in the same position as "orphaned Tarzan..."
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- OR go with a giant 'I', like on the VHS cover, where the first letter of the synopsis is humongous
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Well I did make the I a bit Bigger I tried to make it a lot bigger and it messes with the whole paragraph to much
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:yes:

Still think you ought to lose the drop shadow on the TT tho
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Post by bazzah »

That texture really helps :) This looks much better, but I agree you should remove the drop shadow on the title
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Post by ctaulbee »

Orphaned words at the end of the first column "expedition enters" should be moved over to the second column IMHO. :)

Also the text column to image alignment on the second one bothers me, it is not aligned to the image like the vhs case is if you look the images and the columns they should align and the images should be the same width as the columns I think, the first one does but the second one does not.

Also on this same subject, I think the columns and images should all be the same width, the second column text is wider I think, I'd find a happy median between the two and make them all match.
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