Kingsman The Golden Circle

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Post by Speedz0r »

Nice work so far Baz, but the guys on the back are too small compared to the cars, the cars look gigantic next to them. Remember that a person is usually a bit taller then the car itself.
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What about trying to make the stills more smalls and try to integrate them on a poster frame to fit it with your background! Not sure if you follow me on idea
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Thanks guys. I kinda like the stills :p This is what I was planning to do with them, but obviously with different actors. I have increased the size of the Jag, and added the cowboy. The taxi was really low quality, so I couldn't increase it anymore. Therefore I have removed it. Besides, I needed somewhere for the features. I have also changed the tagline.

xshoty, I don't understand what you mean about a poster frame?

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Maybe a little more space in between the cars on the front?
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Looks better now ;) , but I agree with JR, the cars seem to be too close to each other atm.
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Post by bazzah »

Thanks guys :)

I have spaced the cars a little. Changed the stills and added some more characters on the back. How is this?

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Post by sauron »

Looking good but I feel that the stills are just replicating the front, have you tried it with actual stills instead?
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Looks great now ;) . Maybe you could try sauron's idea to see how it looks?
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Post by Stringelax »

I have one remark (sorry).
The cowboy with the lasso is too short according perspective.
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Thanks guys. I tried the stills, but I much prefer it with the character heads :) And don't apologise Stringelax, this is what the WIP is about! I appreciate ALL of the feedback!

Added the special features and changed the size of lasso guy

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