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Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 4:47 pm
by sauron
Looking good but I think the blood dripping from the skin looks too fake as they're all the same length, maybe adjust the length of them? Also the chains looks a bit flat, maybe some lighting on the edges and where the chains link might make them look a bit more 3D?
Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 6:06 pm
by bazzah
Better?
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Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 7:47 pm
by sauron
Yup looks better now
Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 8:10 pm
by bazzah
Thanks Sauron. I have changed the stills, chains, pig guy and tagline on the back too. Is this working better?
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Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 8:18 pm
by sauron
Looks good to me, maybe you could try the synopsis in the colour of the hair on the front instead of in white?
Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 8:58 pm
by Speedz0r
The chain looks better now (great work btw). Not sure about the puzzle pieces, I feel like they take up too much space and are too spread out atm (it is a nice idea tho, so you should keep it, but maybe not exactly as it is now). The synopsis look a little dull, might be too small and the spacing between the lines is too big, imo. The blood dripping off the meat should be bigger, maybe only one drop, just like the one you have on the chain, maybe a little longer. The blood splatter on the back looks good, but a bit random placed. I think the front could do with some actor names in white, either at the bottom or swap them with the tagline?
edit: PS: added some screens, Boss.
Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2017 12:50 pm
by bazzah
Thanks guys. I have made some modifications. I haven't tried the actor names yet, but will see what it looks like. And ignore the legal area please
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Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2017 1:16 pm
by Speedz0r
I really think that you should fix the legals, haha
just kidding
. I think it looks better now, I really like that you added the face to the synopsis, hoping you'll close the wide spacing on line #2? The blood drop on the meat seems to be far too long for it to be blood (if it was slime then it could work). Also, instead of just having it kinda like a line, could you make it more as a droplet at the end?
Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2017 2:43 pm
by sauron
Come on Baz them legals look rubbish
I agree with what Speed has said, also maybe make the front background a little darker so it matches the back?
Posted: Sat Sep 16, 2017 6:31 pm
by bazzah
I think this is now done
I amended your suggestions, and also changed the blur screen cap. It didn't look right to me
Any more suggestions?
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