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Post by bazzah »

Thanks Arky :)

Here is where I am so far.

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I still have some touching up to do on the montage....

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Awesome job! One thing tho, is the ship in the stills a layer on its own or is it part of the still image? Seeing that the ship above interacts with the stills (very clever btw), it seems silly to have the same ship on the stills as well. I have not seen the movie, barley watched the trailer and have no clue about how many chips there is, but usually there's one that stands out in these kind of movies.
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Thanks Speed. There is just the one mothership. I have cloned two of them out of the montage, but I haven't done the third yet :) Still a bit of work to do on it yet
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I think the montage is done. Any suggestions?

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Yup, looks really great!
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Post by bazzah »

Small update. I removed the frames around the synopsis and features, and moved the features underneath the montage. I think this layout looks better

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Post by Zungam »

Maybe add some glow underneath the ship like the image you posted on page 1?
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Post by sauron »

Looks rubbish :p :lol:

Great update Baz but I think the synopsis either needs more words added for it to work justified, if not left align it, also the glows on the special features are too much I think.
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Post by Speedz0r »

Awesome update boss. I think all you need to do is just move "the" in the synopsis down a line. I do feel the spacing is a bit much tho. Also as sauron said, I would make the star lights smaller (maybe half the size of what they are now).
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Post by bazzah »

Thanks all. Z, I will look at that glow. Speed and Sauron, I agree with your points :) I will make some adjustments. Thanks again :D
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