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Posted: Mon Sep 28, 2015 9:04 pm
by sauron
Looks good to me! Looking forward to seeing more.
Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2015 4:27 pm
by Cirus
Update:
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Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2015 5:22 pm
by sauron
Awesome work C - colouring is great!
How about having special features in white instead of orange?
Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2015 6:16 pm
by Bozzy
This is really good. I love those frames with the lightning!
The background (of the truck) I think is a little boring maybe, what if you change
it to a street similar to what you did with the front?
Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2015 7:34 pm
by Cirus
So I changed the background, the still images are raw at the moment, and maybe the quote is too long, but I can't find shorter one.
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Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2015 7:39 pm
by sauron
The new background looks much better! I personally think the quote is fine, fits perfectly in there.
Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2015 7:53 pm
by Zungam
Yeah, the quote works imo, especially when you even out the left side with synopsis. Excellent stuff!
Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2015 8:27 pm
by yodamjh
really loving this so far!
Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2015 8:39 pm
by sauron
How about decreasing some of the blues used to really boost the red/orange colour?
See animated GIF below...
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Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2015 9:23 pm
by Bozzy
The new background is perfect! Very nice!