The Flash S01

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Post by sauron »

Looks good to me! Looking forward to seeing more.
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Update:

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Post by sauron »

Awesome work C - colouring is great!

How about having special features in white instead of orange?
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Post by Bozzy »

This is really good. I love those frames with the lightning!
The background (of the truck) I think is a little boring maybe, what if you change
it to a street similar to what you did with the front?
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Post by Cirus »

So I changed the background, the still images are raw at the moment, and maybe the quote is too long, but I can't find shorter one.

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Post by sauron »

The new background looks much better! I personally think the quote is fine, fits perfectly in there.
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Yeah, the quote works imo, especially when you even out the left side with synopsis. Excellent stuff!
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really loving this so far!
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Post by sauron »

How about decreasing some of the blues used to really boost the red/orange colour?

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Post by Bozzy »

The new background is perfect! Very nice!
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