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Rearranged some elements. Took some red out, per Venome. Found another image of Rudakova, hope that is less cartoonish, per Sxxo. Still need to add some quotes and credits and do the specifications... But here's the progress.
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Great! You should remove the stroke on the barcode tho. :)
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I think this may be your best work yet! Great updates gb. Colors look better now ;)
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Thanks V! Removed the stroke, JR. Added the updates. Thoughts?
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Perhaps try to adjust the skintone of Statham on the back, so that he matches with the one on the front?
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Looks great, one of your best works till now :)
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How would the spine logo's, spine pic stroke and stills block surround thingy look in a deeper blue/grey picked from the sky on the front, I just think that orange red combo draws the eye too much and doesn't gel with the rest of the cover which is pretty cool, maybe also use it fir the credit/legal block - my two cents :)
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Just a thought - to hold all three movies, wouldn't you need a 14mm spine case? :chin:
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I have a three-disc case with a regular sized spine, JR. I am not sure if it's 4+ that have the 14mm spine, but my three-disc cases are the same width as the 1-2 disc. I tried your suggestion, Ripper and do like the look of the blue. It is less distracting. I also never really loved that image of Statham on back, so I used a movie still instead. Thoughts?
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Post by pytlaczek »

Picture of the back looks better, there is more action. :thumb: While colors I preferred previous. But this is just my feeling. ;)
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