The Walking Dead

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It looks great, but almost to clean imo. The fence looks like something that just set up? Maybe wrap and grunge it a bit
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Looks great V - but Salsa do have a point about the fence. :)
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Real nice V :) like the birds/hawks.
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So is this any better?

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:thumb:
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Very nice. :drool:
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Really? I was going to try again tommorow :chin:
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It still feels a little clean to me - try grunging the cover more.
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Maybe help as little twisted wires protruding above the pipe? Because this netting really is too new :D .
Something like that:

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Post by venome »

Thanks guys. A little more done - maybe the preview is not showing the detail i see in the fence. but it's definitely not clean. Worked on the lighting and around the eyes and added some blood. Moved the girl so that her eyes can be seen clearly.

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