The Amazing Spiderman

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quick update
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nice work so far :)
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Thanks Jolly roger, but theres still loads to do

need to the credits and special features, perhaps add a features box for the logo and credits
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Update

Special features
Lizard on back

Don't suppose anyone has any of the credits for the film do they, if not don't worry i'll make my own but would be a hell of
a time saver lol :giggle:
anyway enjoy let me know what you think also i think will include a uk box version for this cover and all previous covers
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For me.. you don't need Spidey as the main focus on back, but i get that he's there because of the Gwen image.

Synopsis and features have little space and look kinda awkward atm. I'm not sure what to suggest other than a larger Lizard pic flipped over and placed as though he's grabbing the screen panel?
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Update took on board what venom said - i think i might to increase the spacing on back text a bit more
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yup, looks a little too close together:)
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UPDATE
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In your tagline on the back, make the word "THE" the size of the world "UNTOLD" and make "UNTOLD" the size of "THE." Basically, just switch 'em.

In title treatments, headlines, or any other instance, "THE" should never be one of the words you emphasize. It's a nothing word.
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