The Dark Knight Rises

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Post by Nightrider »

Yeah that's looking better mate :)
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Agreed! Getting there jpeg :)
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Yep, looks veeery good :)
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Very nice update bud ;)
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Awesome front jpeg! Those are some great images you managed to find!
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Thanks for the comments and help guys....JR, thanks again for the adjustments help!

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Wondering if the shadow from the bike is too dark....Catwoman is definitely too pale!
Maybe more fire in the cloud at the top??
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I think the 'bullet rain' should go the other way. Just flip the layer. If you take a look at the 'cloud of bullets' you have a large concentration to the far right, but what are the odds that the shells should be fired by the gun on a moving motor cycle, flip thru the air, and then ALL of them ending up the same place?

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Now, if you were to place the most dense part of the cloud closer to the guns blazing, it would look more realistic.
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Great updates jpeg.!
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Post by venome »

Update looks good, i thought they were toys as well, are they renders?
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I'll work on the bullets.....the cloud has nothing to do with the bike....it's supposed to be a separate
explosion in the background.....just worried if "firing" it up too much would interfere with the synopsis.
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