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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2012 3:15 pm
by calinutzuu
Made him smaller to fit the title better. Changed the color "from the director" to match Gerard Butler. Moved "Hope is... " up a little.
Finished?

Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2012 8:55 pm
by JollyRoger
I think it's better :arms: But the 'Director' text almost disappears in the new color. A little lighter for both 'Butler' and 'Director' and you're done imo. :)

Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2012 10:12 pm
by jwshaw89
Maybe move the 'hope is the greatest weapon of all' tagline across so it finishes in line with the other bits of text. Then it wouldn't overlap his leg.

Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 11:38 am
by calinutzuu
Made the changes on the front. So here is what i have for the back.

Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 11:44 am
by Zungam
Looks really good!

Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 1:43 pm
by Paris
Nice job mate! A few suggestions:

For the stills...
• Switch the picture of Gerard with the picture of the children

For the legals...
• make them a dark grey (but not too dark) to make the Special Features standout more

For the quote
• make sure to mention the author under the quote ;)

Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2012 2:43 pm
by JollyRoger
Paris makes some solid points, and only misses my first thought - the frames of the stills. A little too 'nice' IMO. How about re-using the ripped effect you've got going for the synopsis? Perhaps bust up the stills frames a tad like that?

Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:59 am
by venome
Great layout ;)

Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 10:34 am
by Nightrider
This is looking really good!
Very good points above, I especially like JR's idea for the framing of the stills, I actually think a line of stills would look better here, but thats more of a personal choice I think.

I think you have put a lot of work into this and it's showing through :)

Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 11:30 am
by Droogs
looks great Cal, I agree with the points from Nike and JR.

keep up the good work.