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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 4:45 pm
by euroboy
Sweet stuff as usual! Real bad-a$$ feel that makes me want to see this. Is it any good?

A couple of thoughts then... :)

Let me see, yeah, I agree about the hand and gun. Maybe they're a little big? Or I don't know.

What I do know, and this is me being picky, is that you need to slightly adjust the kerning on some letters in the title treatment. Look at the space on both sides of the second "E" in "PREACHER" for example. Other than that, brilliant typo as always!

Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 5:29 pm
by venome
The machine gun is fine. Hope you continue with the hair detail and that you soften the blending on the background where it goes from dark to light on the left.

Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 6:34 pm
by JollyRoger
euroboy wrote:
QUOTE (euroboy @ Mar 15 2012, 05:45 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
What I do know, and this is me being picky, is that you need to slightly adjust the kerning on some letters in the title treatment. Look at the space on both sides of the second "E" in "PREACHER" for example. Other than that, brilliant typo as always!


Agreed :agree: Brill spot on those letters David - I didn't even notice myself! :yikes:

Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 7:46 pm
by samppa
So, the last update for today :)
Adjusted the kerning and tried to fix the hair, any better?

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Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 7:47 pm
by sauron
Looking great! Nothing to add...

Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 10:09 pm
by yesheman
That my friend, is looking awesome :)

Posted: Thu Mar 15, 2012 11:27 pm
by Nightrider
It is looking really good, maybe we could see a little more definition of the bottom part of the arm that is holding the gun ?

Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2012 2:16 am
by JollyRoger
Good stuff! :arms:

Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2012 4:58 am
by M0vieM0nster
:iamwithstupid:

Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2012 10:22 am
by Sxxo
Real sweat Samppa :)