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Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 3:11 pm
by Droogs
Cheers guys, I kinda knew it wasnt right. Ive been wanting to add a pic of the kid from the very beginning but I cant for the life of me find a decent one that`ll go with the front.
heres an update.
Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 3:30 pm
by JollyRoger
Much better!
A couple of things:
Personally I don't care for the tagline on the robes. I think it would work better on its own.
I think the spine could benefit from a picture.
Front is much better, now that it's less crowded. Only thing left is to work some more on the perspective.
Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 4:18 pm
by M0vieM0nster
I agree with Jakobs comments above and to me jackman on the front still just stands out and doesn't quite look right imo, i'm not too sure what to suggest at the moment but i will have a think about it
Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 4:35 pm
by Droogs
JollyRoger wrote:Much better!
A couple of things:
Personally I don't care for the tagline on the robes. I think it would work better on its own.
I think the spine could benefit from a picture.
Front is much better, now that it's less crowded. Only thing left is to work some more on the perspective.
Cheers mate.
I was unsure about the tagline myself so definitely removed now.
I havent touched the spine yet mate other than the TT, will defo be adding something to it, I`m not a fan of a plain spine.
Any hints on how to improve the perspective? robots bigger? jackman smaller?
cheers
Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 4:36 pm
by Droogs
M0vieM0nster wrote:I agree with Jakobs comments above and to me jackman on the front still just stands out and doesn't quite look right imo, i'm not too sure what to suggest at the moment but i will have a think about it
cheers mate, dya think hes too bright maybe?
Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 4:41 pm
by JollyRoger
I think I saw a poster much like your front, having Jackman roughly the same size as you with the two bots at the back. I think you will need to work on the front pair some more. Perhaps smaller?
Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 4:58 pm
by M0vieM0nster
Possibly, darkening him up a bit may well do the trick
Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 5:20 pm
by Droogs
Cheers guys, this any better?
Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 8:35 pm
by Paris
The quote on the back seems WAY out of place, maybe give it treatment so it looks like the TT?
Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 8:51 pm
by bpmford
Looking good bisky!
I thin the front robots on the front could us a bit of levels adjustments to brighten them up, they are a bit dark atm.