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Jontaz93 · Post by **Jontaz93** » Tue Jan 04, 2011 6:30 pm

The thing is that I've used the whole picture of Pitt there. I could make it bigger but I don't know if that would look good.

Post by **Kernie** » Tue Jan 04, 2011 6:32 pm

You could use the clone stamp to extend the bottom of the image.

Are you familiar with the clone stamp in Photoshop?

bpmford · Post by **bpmford** » Wed Jan 05, 2011 5:06 pm

I like the change to the back, but I think it would look a bit better if the screen strip on the back were in the same position and the same size as the line that goes across the front and spine.

I also think the angled synopsis looks a little odd... I would say to either flow it a bit with the side of Brad's face, or just have it straight... but that's just a personal preference.

Jontaz93 · Post by **Jontaz93** » Thu Jan 06, 2011 4:24 pm

I've been kind of busy the last day so I haven't done anything. I will try to do some more today.
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Post by **RRJR84** » Thu Jan 06, 2011 4:27 pm

I agree with bpm try moving the screen strip up slightly it's look much better. Also I still think you should try a different pic for the spine.

Jontaz93 · Post by **Jontaz93** » Thu Jan 06, 2011 5:21 pm

New small update. I've played around with the synopsis a bit and moved up the stills so they're the same hight as the red. I still don't know what to do with the black part behind the info.
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Post by **Kernie** » Thu Jan 06, 2011 5:28 pm

Jontaz93 wrote:
QUOTE (Jontaz93 @ Jan 6 2011, 12:21 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
New small update. I've played around with the synopsis a bit and moved up the stills so they're the same hight as the red. I still don't know what to do with the black part behind the info.

I don't think you need to do anything with the black part behind the info. Leave it black.

I think what they meant by making the stills line up with the red strip was to make the height of the stills the same height as the red strip and line them up. It would look nice if it all seemed to be a continuous strip across the middle, changing into a still strip on the back. This might also help with the size and line-spacing on the synopsis. Right now, the text in the synopsis is about 2-3 point sizes too big and the linespacing is a bit too much as well. If you make the still strip taller, you can shrink the synopsis text and reduce the line-spacing, making it all look much cleaner.

And I think the red text at the back top should be a critic quote or a tagline instead of "Brad Pitt and Morgan Freeman." Putting the actor names there just seems odd and I've never really seen a retail or a custom do that. Edit: On second look, I realize that it's supposed to be the start of the synopsis text, but it still looks weird. :P

It's getting there, keep up the good work!!

Jontaz93 · Post by **Jontaz93** » Thu Jan 06, 2011 5:41 pm

Now then?
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Post by **Kernie** » Thu Jan 06, 2011 5:51 pm

I think it looks better!

Jontaz93 · Post by **Jontaz93** » Thu Jan 06, 2011 6:11 pm

I'm fixing the legals now. Is there anything more to change?

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