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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 5:13 pm
by JollyRoger
levels on the joker needs afjustment - and some red colour??

Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 10:34 pm
by Paris
Looks good, I think it would look better if you didn't blend the picture line on the back and showed the edges

Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 7:58 pm
by felipe-11
Thanks for the feedback, here's an update, much better I think:

[attachment=13531:The_Dark...review_2.jpg]

Finished?

Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 8:03 pm
by Paris
I think you should change the grey backgrounds to white, it might look a little better

Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 8:04 pm
by Arkflip
Being picky you could reduce the stroke size around the barcode box or lose it.
Also the numbers under the barcode should be grey or black, white doesn't work.

:)

Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 8:36 pm
by felipe-11
nikerun147 wrote:
QUOTE (nikerun147 @ Sep 13 2010, 05:03 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
I think you should change the grey backgrounds to white, it might look a little better

White was my first choice for it actually, then I ditched it, but now I think I like it better :)

[attachment=13532:The_Dark...review_1.jpg]

Fixed that barcode too Felipe, thanks

Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 8:43 pm
by sauron
Not too sure about the Joker being so blue... I would take the saturation down a bit on the blue and red.

Still don't think the Cape is working either.

Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 1:55 am
by Relocator
Looks done to me, and it looks delicious. I want it in, and around my Blu-ray case. And I'm sure my Blu-ray case feels the same. It wants to be wrapped up and snuggled tightly with this cover.

Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 4:50 am
by felipe-11
sauron wrote:
QUOTE (sauron @ Sep 13 2010, 05:43 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Not too sure about the Joker being so blue... I would take the saturation down a bit on the blue and red.

Still don't think the Cape is working either.

Damn, you were right! A little desaturation can go a long way...

[attachment=13533:The_Dark...review_1.jpg]

No changes on the cape though, I've tried a bunch of things but I can't get it to look any better than that... If anyone cares to make a mockup to give me some pointers be my guest, if not, I'll be leaving it like that, I don't think it looks that bad anyway (and Relocator seems like he kinda likes it too :D )

Relocator wrote:
QUOTE (Relocator @ Sep 13 2010, 10:55 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Looks done to me, and it looks delicious. I want it in, and around my Blu-ray case. And I'm sure my Blu-ray case feels the same. It wants to be wrapped up and snuggled tightly with this cover.

:lol22: :rofl:

Posted: Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:38 pm
by sauron