Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 7:56 pm
The gun is great and I think you can put some small polaroidpictures spreading on the ground.
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Posted: Mon Mar 29, 2010 8:15 pm
Looking great bunny, nice and clean just the way I like!
Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 2:14 pm
Looking good.. I like the gun, nice touch. First thing that comes to my mind on this movie is tattoos, and Polaroids. Hope you can add those in somewhere. 
Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 8:58 am
Looking killer Bunny, but i gotta say i like jannecover's idea scattered Polaroids on the ground would look much better and would also suit the movie well as he has a lot of Polaroids scattered in his apartment if memory serves me right.....chaotic like....get my meaning?
Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 2:08 am
I'm trying not to get too carried away with the photos. They're definitely a big part of the movie, but he only uses maybe 5 or 6 total throughout the movie (I know because I foolishly tried to re-create them 
), so I'm probably going to stick with the few I've got going and then not use them on the back. There's plenty of other stuff between his notes and tattoos and regular imagery that it should work out well. 
Thanks for all of the input so far, guys. I definitely appreciate it, and I've been trying everything out. I really wanted to have Teddy and the car on the front, but haven't been able to get Teddy to work at all, so he's gone for now. My next step is going to try to incorporate the tattoo facts and such.
), so I'm probably going to stick with the few I've got going and then not use them on the back. There's plenty of other stuff between his notes and tattoos and regular imagery that it should work out well. Thanks for all of the input so far, guys. I definitely appreciate it, and I've been trying everything out. I really wanted to have Teddy and the car on the front, but haven't been able to get Teddy to work at all, so he's gone for now. My next step is going to try to incorporate the tattoo facts and such.
Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 2:31 am
I...............love it!!!! :clapping:
Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 6:45 am
Yeah, photos look gr8.....gotta say im not keen on the car for some reason
Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 7:33 am
looks great!
Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 10:18 pm
Every little element of this composition drains so much time.
On to the back?
(in-case)
On to the back?
(in-case)
Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 10:37 pm
Based purely on design, I have to chip in...
To me, the typography needs a little something. Now, please don't get me wrong, Tim - I know that you're a lover of retail design, so I'm not gonna go there!
But...
You have a (IMO) slightly too small TT or a too big actor's name. The font chosen for TT seems a little bit too edged. Perhaps go with one with more rounded serifs?
Your faded text could be more transparent, so it's still there, but not as prominent. ATM it's stealing a little too much from the (again IMO) not so well executed typography of Title and actor.
Could you please explain the various choices of fonts for the faded text? I've never seen this movie, so a little enlightement would do wonders for me.
To me, the typography needs a little something. Now, please don't get me wrong, Tim - I know that you're a lover of retail design, so I'm not gonna go there!
But...
You have a (IMO) slightly too small TT or a too big actor's name. The font chosen for TT seems a little bit too edged. Perhaps go with one with more rounded serifs?
Your faded text could be more transparent, so it's still there, but not as prominent. ATM it's stealing a little too much from the (again IMO) not so well executed typography of Title and actor.
Could you please explain the various choices of fonts for the faded text? I've never seen this movie, so a little enlightement would do wonders for me.