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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2013 8:31 pm
by Cirus
what about now?
(and I think the yellow tagline works better on the blue background.)
[attachment=24929:diehard3sample.jpg]
Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 12:06 am
by Nightrider
Ok just my thought so far, I like the features where you have them now.
I personally don't think you need the box behind them TBH, however I think what might looks good is if you tried to justify the features, like the synopsis is and put just a line, the colour of what the box is, between the features and the synopsis
Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 2:30 am
by venome
That yellow does look much better.
Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 3:35 pm
by Cirus
I tried something. What do you think?
(justify didn't work at the features, i don't like it)
[attachment=24943:diehard3sample.jpg]
Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 5:43 pm
by Arkflip
Much better!! I like and prefer this new layout!
One thing you could work... align the features text with the synopsis (see sample) and then adjust the special features line with the quote but keep the features list where they are now. With that you'll increase the leading between the special features line and the features above.
[attachment=24944:cirus.png]
Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 6:11 pm
by Arkflip
Can i nitpick again? I think the quotes at the back should look like this...
[attachment=24945:cirus_2.png]
Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 6:35 pm
by Cirus
Something like this?
[attachment=24946:diehard3sample.jpg]
Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 6:46 pm
by Arkflip
Great!! Don't forget to adjust the previous covers too!
And now move on for the others
EDIT: you missed the word "of" between "target" and "a terrorist".
Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 7:59 pm
by Cirus
Here's the set so far. Hope you like it.
[attachment=24947:diehards.png]
Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2013 8:03 pm
by Arkflip
I'm loving this set! Amazing work Cirus!!