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Post by Cirus »

what about now?
(and I think the yellow tagline works better on the blue background.)

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Post by Nightrider »

Ok just my thought so far, I like the features where you have them now.
I personally don't think you need the box behind them TBH, however I think what might looks good is if you tried to justify the features, like the synopsis is and put just a line, the colour of what the box is, between the features and the synopsis
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Post by venome »

That yellow does look much better.
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Post by Cirus »

I tried something. What do you think?
(justify didn't work at the features, i don't like it)

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Post by Arkflip »

Much better!! I like and prefer this new layout!

One thing you could work... align the features text with the synopsis (see sample) and then adjust the special features line with the quote but keep the features list where they are now. With that you'll increase the leading between the special features line and the features above.

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Post by Arkflip »

Can i nitpick again? I think the quotes at the back should look like this...

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Post by Cirus »

Something like this?

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Post by Arkflip »

Great!! Don't forget to adjust the previous covers too!
And now move on for the others :)

EDIT: you missed the word "of" between "target" and "a terrorist".
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Post by Cirus »

Here's the set so far. Hope you like it.

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Post by Arkflip »

I'm loving this set! Amazing work Cirus!!
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