Spider-Man Trilogy

DarthVong · Post by **DarthVong** » Mon Jan 31, 2011 6:27 am

For some reason that fire ball about to hit Mary Jane's face is bothering me....maybe replace her pic with another villain?

Post by **JollyRoger** » Mon Jan 31, 2011 6:36 am

Remember to make Maguire's surname begin with a capital M

LittleCoolDude · Post by **LittleCoolDude** » Mon Jan 31, 2011 3:12 pm

Thanks guys, sorry i guess i'm working on this in baby steps. Changed the first still to Venom. Did what venome said with the tag, kept the same phrase and removed the quotes. Fixed the typo's in the synopsis.

EDIT: Added the change that venome suggested, I think it looks better

Post by **sauron** » Tue Feb 01, 2011 1:11 am

I'm not sure about Spidey coming out of the screens, the other look okay just spidey is a bit O.T.T

Not sure about the quote either.

Post by **Kernie** » Tue Feb 01, 2011 3:16 am

Still not sure why you're not filling in that space above the synopsis better. Find a longer quote or tagline that will maximize all the empty space more (see below).

I think someone else suggested a panel behind the Special Features box. Maybe something like what I did below?

I hope you don't take offense to me putting together this visual reference for you. Sometimes, it's just easier to make a mock-up than actually try to explain it in words...

Anyway, just suggestions, don't feel obligated to use them...

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LittleCoolDude · Post by **LittleCoolDude** » Tue Feb 01, 2011 3:39 am

Naw I dont mind at all, it gives a better idea. I really like what you did with the Frame, i think venome suggested it over at the worx. wasn't sure how to pull it off, thought of using that pattern overlay i got from here but the way you did it looks great... Thanks Kernie!!! I think you solved my special features issue.

Post by **JollyRoger** » Tue Feb 01, 2011 6:16 am

With a great super suit, comes great groin itch!

LittleCoolDude · Post by **LittleCoolDude** » Tue Feb 01, 2011 11:53 pm

Did some more rearranging. Tried the advice from kernie I like the way it looks, hopefully i'm not crazy :P Dont nit pick the SF content yet, i still have to add more, just going for is the style working right now.

Yay or nay?

Post by **Kernie** » Wed Feb 02, 2011 12:02 am

I think the style of the SF is working alright at the moment. Although I don't like the pink/purple colors in the panel... I'm okay with the purple by itself, but combined with the pink, everything feels a bit too "girly" for a male superhero film (even though Peter does cry waaay too much in the third film).

In my opinion, the styling on the SF text is too much. It's okay for the "Special Features" header, but it makes the list text a bit too difficult to read. A general design rule of thumb is not to style any text below 12-14 pt. (not sure if those are the exact pt. sizes, but it's something like that... basically, don't style small text).

I think you're using the tagline space better, but I think the font is too plain for such large text (and you could probably adjust the line-spacing so that the two lines of text are closer together).

Sorry for nitpicking...

LittleCoolDude · Post by **LittleCoolDude** » Wed Feb 02, 2011 1:35 pm

LMAO!!! Dont worry kernie, I already saw this last night and made some changes with the colour of the frame, will change the text colour and add more features tonight, I'm also realligning the tag to fit a bit better, I think i rushed it to fit before..

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