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Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 7:39 pm
by Paris
I started on the Back of Phantom Menace before I have to resources for the front, I had to decrease the special features from pt. 6 to 5.5 pt. in order to fit it all. I still need to flesh out the descriptions on the features
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Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 8:06 pm
by Kernie
Nice start!
Two things (here I go again, Arky! :P ):
Avoid widows (
click here for info on widows & ophans). Decrease the kerning on the last line of your synopsis to avoid "Sith" being on a line by itself.
I realize there's a lot of Features on this one, but do you plan to use an image like Yoda on this cover? I think you should, layout consistency is important when doing a series. I know I talked you into adding descriptions to the Special Features, but you can probably edit some of them down to fit into the space you had on Empire. For instance, "The Beginning" could say "The Beginning. All-new hour-long documentary" and leave it at that. You could probably also lump some things together like "Production Gallery, Theatrical Posters, Theatrical Trailers and TV Spots."
Either way, it's a solid start and I'm excited to see more!!

Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 8:36 pm
by Paris
Thanks Kernie!!
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Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 8:38 pm
by Arkflip
Go Kernie!!
So far i don't have much to add to the new cover nikerun (btw, what's your real name?), only thing i noticed was the widow but Kernie already mentioned that so... let's wait for the next update
EDIT: just saw the new update... much better and i like a lot the red color!
Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 8:40 pm
by Paris
Thanks, and my real name is Paris
Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 8:55 pm
by Kernie
Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 8:57 pm
by Arkflip
Another thing i noticed was the tag instead of a quote. If you wanna keep the consistency on the covers i think you need to decide between the tag and the quote. Personally i prefer the tagline.
Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:00 pm
by Paris
I was going to use a quote but not a lot of good thing were said about this movie haha and not all of the movies have taglines
Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:01 pm
by Kernie
Good point, Arky... but did the critics have anything good to say about Phantom Menace? :P :P :P
I personally don't mind the tagline though, but agree about consistency...
Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:25 pm
by Arkflip
Star Wars: Episode I• Every saga has a beginning
• Every generation has a legend
Star Wars: Episode II• The saga continues
• A Jedi shall not know anger. Nor hatred. Nor love.
• The clones are coming.
Star Wars: Episode IIIDidn't find any tagline for this episode
Star Wars: Episode IV• May the force be with you
• The force will be with you
Star Wars: Episode V• The battle continues...
Star Wars: Episode VI• The empire falls...
• Return to a galaxy... far, far away
Hope this helps you
