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Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2025 11:31 am
by JollyRoger
M0vieM0nster wrote:QUOTE (M0vieM0nster @ Jun 1 2025, 10:53 PM) I think if you keep the red box on the back tone it down a bit or one the newer version it kinda makes the red frame on the front stand out too much so maybe change that but nice to see it comingg along
So, back to the red Box - but I've toned down the red across the cover, and added some more color on the characters on the back helping balancing out things. Also fixed the back typography; steering away from
Helvetica, and using
Eurostile instead, since it's so close (if not the same) as the TT. How's this?
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Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2025 11:49 am
by bazzah
The back image being more saturated is much better
Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2025 4:08 pm
by Speedz0r
I think you can add even more saturation to the characters on the back, they all so seem too bright, so I would try to make the highlights darker. Also the small guy all the way in the back (white shirt) seems a bit greenish. The barcode also seems a bit big and not centered inside the white box.
Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2025 5:55 pm
by JollyRoger
Alright, even more (custom) color.
Barcode centered, must've missed that.
PS.: Tried coloring the spine pic, but damn, that sh!t is hard to get right and believable. I don't know how Tim do it!
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Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2025 6:03 pm
by Speedz0r
Looks pretty good

Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2025 6:59 pm
by bazzah
The coloured characters work much better

Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2025 7:41 pm
by M0vieM0nster
Much better!

Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2025 9:09 am
by JollyRoger
Started the first Front composition, and have brought some of the color onto the back as well. Considering if the spine should have something else; not b/w...
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Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2025 11:28 am
by bazzah
I think the spine should match the rest. Looking good bud.
Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2025 1:17 pm
by JollyRoger
Bazzah wrote:QUOTE (Bazzah @ Jun 3 2025, 01:28 PM) I think the spine should match the rest. Looking good bud.
How about this for a new spine with some color? I'll adjust it to fit with rest of the cover of course.
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