Cool to see a fresh new direction for this title!
If there's a way of making the image a bit more simple, I think you have nice pieces here.
Currently, the top of the dark cross is kind of getting lost in the dark sky (plus covered by the title), so it takes extra time to read all of the pieces. If you take a bit of that top darkness out of the sky, the cross might "pop" more.
Likewise, the guy gets lost a little bit in that tree... maybe you could lighten the tree? That would help differentiate it from both the guy and the cross.
And, maybe move the title down to the middle? That might create a nice visual stack of the cross up top, the title in the middle, and the guy at the bottom.
(Another option might be to use this as the centerpiece of your back instead, so you don't have to worry about the title text competing for attention.)
Looks like you're on to another winner, JR!
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