Star Wars - Obi-Wan Kenobi

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Another great one to your Star Wars collection. Love the front image! :)

The only thing I'd suggest is change the exposure of Darth Vader. He is exposed from the left Obi Wan is from the right and youn Leia right/front.

Since he is early all black it shouldn't be to difficult, it's only his helmet. you could mirror him as well but the lightsaber would be in the wrong hand then.

The Tie fighter also from the right so you might rotate the starship on the left for about 30°-40° to the right as well.
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The only thing that is throwing me off is on the back between Darth Vader's feet is the black and white distressed element of the background. It keeps drawing my eyes to that element. Maybe just tidy it up down there. Just a thought.
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Fidi wrote:QUOTE (Fidi @ Apr 11 2025, 10:08 AM) Another great one to your Star Wars collection. Love the front image! :)

The only thing I'd suggest is change the exposure of Darth Vader. He is exposed from the left Obi Wan is from the right and youn Leia right/front.

Since he is early all black it shouldn't be to difficult, it's only his helmet. you could mirror him as well but the lightsaber would be in the wrong hand then.

The Tie fighter also from the right so you might rotate the starship on the left for about 30°-40° to the right as well.
GlobalCinema wrote:QUOTE (GlobalCinema @ Apr 11 2025, 10:34 AM) The only thing that is throwing me off is on the back between Darth Vader's feet is the black and white distressed element of the background. It keeps drawing my eyes to that element. Maybe just tidy it up down there. Just a thought.
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Fixed all the suggestions. Cover uploaded and FINISHED.

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