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Posted: Thu Nov 07, 2024 7:33 pm
by bazzah
It looks really classy bud. Keep going :)

Posted: Thu Nov 07, 2024 10:42 pm
by M0vieM0nster
Looking good :) is it me or does the spacing between lines of the credits look a little big?

Posted: Thu Nov 14, 2024 12:33 pm
by sauron
Looks good :)

Posted: Fri Nov 15, 2024 6:31 pm
by bankska22
All looks good to me. Love this design, Sauron.

Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2024 8:57 pm
by Sxxo
Update time, but not quite finish.

Just testing some minor colours change, a little more space in the credits and the screens pics under the "digital" bar.... feels the right place :Confused:
The screen pics tones don't match... for now...

Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2024 9:26 pm
by Speedz0r
The back looks really good color wise. I'm not too sure about the screens under the "digital bar" tho, seems a bit out of place imo.

Posted: Mon Dec 02, 2024 11:47 pm
by M0vieM0nster
I liike it! Very good work and of course looking forward to seeing the final product :)

Posted: Tue Dec 03, 2024 3:43 pm
by sauron
The screens seem very small to me, I honestly didn't realise they were screens until I saw Speed mention them being below the bar.

Personally, I feel the text that goes over the white circle with the black arrow should be indented so it's not overlapping that.

Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2024 10:39 pm
by Sxxo
I hope that everyone is fine and had a nice Cristmas time with family :)

I made some small changes in the back and tried a diferrent place for the screen bar.

I agree that the overllaping wasn't working, so i errased de globo earth melting.

See you soon.

I wish you all a great new year :cheers:

Posted: Sat Dec 28, 2024 1:06 pm
by JollyRoger
This is excellent work Sxxo, great job so far!

I would suggest to try and add Costner to the left (above the screen caps) and move the text a bit to the right. The backside is very text heavy and I think we need to see the main character.

Also, not sure if the yellow text works.. Maybe just try to have it in bold?
If that doesn’t work I would try a different brighter shade of yellow? This one looks a little green (maybe it’s just against all the blue). If you stick with a yellow, I think the movie name in the credit block would benefit from having the same colour.
Keep it up!