The Shallows (2016)

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Speedz0r
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I agree with sauron. The top also looks a bit empty seeing you have three quotes right on top of each other instead of a bit more spread out.
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Nice to see your progress on this, Sxxo! :cheers:

Along with what the guys have said about some of the other texts, I'd also recommend trying the tagline as 4 lines moved up a bit, since you have that extra space:

What was once
in the deep
is now
in the shallows.

(Or, you could just move the 2-line version up a bit and make your stills larger to help fill things out.)
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I follow the tips and suggestions and now i think it's done.
Only the barcode stayed in black cas i realy tried it in 4 different green tones and they don't feel right.

Thanks to all for the help.

One question to BD: the 4 line TAG tip it's to make them in caps or regular letters?

Cheers :cheers:
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Sxxo wrote:QUOTE (Sxxo @ Oct 25 2022, 05:56 PM) One question to BD: the 4 line TAG tip it's to make them in caps or regular letters?
Either way works. :)
Nice job, it's great to see you back in action with two big covers in a row! :cheers:
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Brilliant work, my only suggestion now i think might be the spacing between the and shallows on the front tt compared to the spine?
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Bunny Dojo wrote:QUOTE (Bunny Dojo @ Oct 25 2022, 11:51 PM) Either way works. :)
Nice job, it's great to see you back in action with two big covers in a row! :cheers:
I liked in caps, so i gave it a try.
As for the covers...thanks for the input. The next one will be (i whish to :innocent: ) a little project of mine that you probably remember :) .

M0vieM0nster wrote:QUOTE (M0vieM0nster @ Oct 26 2022, 12:12 AM) Brilliant work, my only suggestion now i think might be the spacing between the and shallows on the front tt compared to the spine?
You're right. Good spot. Will correct that.
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