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Taglines would be better white like the title and no glow around them... also the tan in the synopsis is low contrast as well :)
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Great to see a WIP from you :D Great start! Why is the spine so wide though? Don't forget to correct the legal area ;)
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M0vieM0nster wrote:QUOTE (M0vieM0nster @ Jan 3 2021, 04:38 PM) Great to see a WIP from you :D Great start! Why is the spine so wide though? Don't forget to correct the legal area ;)

DOH i need to adjust the spine thickness i knew there was somthing i forgot to do lol and yeah legals will be one of the last things but thankyou :)
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Nice start so far, I do still think the synopsis is too big and I agree with C about the glow on the taglines.
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Found the proper blu ray template lol
synopsis isnt done and need to sort it .

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It's coming together nicely now :)
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This is kind of big suggestion but I think it would look slick if you could change the placement of the rope, it takes up a lot of cover real estate as it is now.

You could maybe wrap it around the bottom of the synopsis and even go up around the sword, then move the synopsis over.

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ctaulbee wrote:QUOTE (ctaulbee @ Jan 3 2021, 05:48 PM) This is kind of big suggestion but I think it would look slick if you could change the placement of the rope, it takes up a lot of cover real estate as it is now.

You could maybe wrap it around the bottom of the synopsis and even go up around the sword, then move the synopsis over.

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Ill try :eek: :eek: :eek:
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Looking good.

I would move the stills up a bit as they’re too close to the credits.
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ctaulbee wrote:QUOTE (ctaulbee @ Jan 3 2021, 05:48 PM) This is kind of big suggestion but I think it would look slick if you could change the placement of the rope, it takes up a lot of cover real estate as it is now.

You could maybe wrap it around the bottom of the synopsis and even go up around the sword, then move the synopsis over.
I tried lol

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