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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2018 11:32 am
by highlight
Brightened the field behind the dude and made it more blueish. Thanks for the feedback guys
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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2018 4:07 pm
by Fidi
The guy looks much better now.
Try to match the colors of Robocop on your front/back. The front guy is more yellow but I think the back color works way better.
Not sure about the synopsis font (as far as I can see it on the small preview). But I don't think that's the best choiuce, I'd try some more easy/futuristic like Futura or Bank Gothic if you want all in caps. Or the font from your front tagline should work as well.
Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2018 7:22 pm
by sauron
Agree with Fidi, also the "All New Q&A..." title is a little hard to read towards the end because of the flare.
Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2018 10:04 pm
by Speedz0r
I agree with the boys above
Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2018 10:55 am
by highlight
Wasn't sure about the font either... Changed it to a slightly modified version of Futura, toned down the shine behind Q&A and changed the red tone on the text. Also made Robo on the front more silver and shiny
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2018 7:50 pm
by Speedz0r
Looking really good, but still seems to be some synopsis errors, try to reduce the amount of waterfalls to a minimum (by playing with the text size, width etc). What I mean by waterfalls are the spacing between each word, the top synopsis have a lot of huge gaps between a lot of the words and there are also some on the lower bit. Tagline & SF's look good, as well as the rest of the cover
Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2018 9:51 pm
by Paris
Not bad!
One thing that sticks out is the exposure differences on the images on the front and back: some have bright whites while others look dull). Changing this will really tie everything together
Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2018 11:01 am
by highlight
Adjusted the synopsis text and brightened up Robo on the front even more. I think it's pretty much done
[attachment=38590:robocop3D.jpg]
Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2018 11:14 am
by Fidi
I think it's looking good, everything is coming together.
But you still have a more yellow Robocop on the front and a more blue on the back and in my opinion the difference is too big to keep it like this. On the suit it's obvious and you can sse the difference in his face/skin tone/lips as well.
And I'd darke the bright area behind the sinopsis some more, it's still a bit difficult to read.
On your stills I'd adjust the ones on the right some more. They all could need some contrast, brightness and lights compared to the pictures on the left and all other images on your cover.
Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2018 12:58 pm
by highlight
Starting to think I'm slightly color blind
So I adjusted the front to be more blue/cyan, adjusted the stills and added some shadows behind the synopsis
[attachment=38591:robocop3D.jpg]