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Thanks guys. Yes Speed, that is why I kept it green. I will try blue though, to see how it looks :)
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How's this?

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I am not familiar with your work schedule so if I am calling to early just say it.

The Special Features part is not in sync with the underlying 3D image background.
Also the pictures are not in sync with the 3D background (If you understand what I mean).
But again maybe is this only a set-up and will be fine-tuned later.

For me the Tagline; “Homework can wait, the city can’t” is too small.

Maybe highlight the actor names in red and not in bold in the synopsis?

For the rest I like this Cover very much (refreshing).
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Yeah the blue works much better now :)
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Stringelax wrote:QUOTE (Stringelax @ Sep 29 2017, 01:12 PM) I am not familiar with your work schedule so if I am calling to early just say it.

The Special Features part is not in sync with the underlying 3D image background.
Also the pictures are not in sync with the 3D background (If you understand what I mean).
But again maybe is this only a set-up and will be fine-tuned later.

For me the Tagline; “Homework can wait, the city can’t” is too small.

Maybe highlight the actor names in red and not in bold in the synopsis?

For the rest I like this Cover very much (refreshing).
Thank you all.

Stringelax, do you mean the perspective of the stills and features are not aligned with the perspective of the 3d background?

Small edit on perspectives:
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Post by JollyRoger »

Not too shappy, old man! :cheers:

A much better cover than the movie deserves!

If you wanted to keep the green board, you could add that color to the front as well. Either via green lighting, or by using a paler, green sky as background
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Cheers Jrr. I think I will just keep the blue sign though :)
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Maybe make Homework can wait... in all caps?
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The stills look fine now.
But the complete text of the Special Features are off.
It is (for me) very noticeable due to the “perforated” background. To solve this the text must be made in a normal text square and then rasterized and then squeezed (perspective) so it aligns with the background.
I have tried to clarify it with the following picture.
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Will try that Sauron.

Strinelax, that is very similar to how I am doing it. The only difference is I am converting the text to a shape, to keep it sharp when I use the perspective tool. I then adjust the perspective to the edges. I will have another look though.
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