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Posted: Fri May 05, 2017 7:05 pm
by M0vieM0nster
I dont think the sky needs the yellow tint and i think maybe some more explosion where kong is snapping the helicopter in half?
Posted: Fri May 05, 2017 7:13 pm
by Fidi
Agree with Clint in both points.
What would the title look like in a brighter colour centered at the bottom?
Posted: Fri May 05, 2017 7:53 pm
by wessim
Thanks guys
Bigger explosion, removed the yellow
And what about the tt: better in the air or on top?
Posted: Fri May 05, 2017 9:48 pm
by Arkflip
At the bottom for sure!
Posted: Fri May 05, 2017 11:05 pm
by wessim
thanks bud
It needs some pop, tried several things but it doesn't work.
Hope to have better luck tomorrow.
Posted: Sat May 06, 2017 8:31 am
by Fidi
Title at the bottom works much better I'd say. The only problem is the big (nearly) black area wich is about 25% of the front.
I loved the scene when Kong throw a tree into one of the helicopters. Great to see you've rebuild that!
Posted: Sat May 06, 2017 7:39 pm
by wessim
Thanks bud, your absolutely right.
Here's another update..
Posted: Sat May 06, 2017 9:12 pm
by wessim
I think the idea was a lot cooler than the execution
Posted: Sun May 07, 2017 7:15 am
by Speedz0r
I think there's too many helicopters, not sure if it was this many in the movie even (haven't seen it). What about boats? Was there boats in the movie? That would make the front more dynamic. If you end up not using this for the front, then the hand would probably work great on the back, with one or two helicopters.
Posted: Sun May 07, 2017 12:47 pm
by weyn
In the movie there are about 10 in total, maybe even more. Didn't count them. What bothers me is that they are copy-pasted and hence perfectly aligned, like a flight squadron ^^ It just looks unrealistic. However, for the cover you don't need to show that many IMO. I'd suggest using only 2 of the lower choppers (slightly rotate one of them) and 1 of the upper ones (in the film, they only have 1 of these). The one that got hit by a palm tree looks cool. Keep it.
The chopper crashing into the water doesn't have the correct perspectival height. It's right in between the two rocks, filling the gap which is about 50m, compared to the rocks. So the chopper should A) be moved a bit down (towards the title) or B) reduced in size.
Since the sun light is coming from behind, I would add some rim light on the rocks. Like this:
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