Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 8:35 pm
Bazzah wrote:QUOTE (Bazzah @ Sep 21 2015, 09:08 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>Coming along buddy. I think you should either remove those lines on the front though, or blur them
I agree, it kind of looks like small cuts in the image at the moment.
Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 8:36 pm
Another slight update, not sure about the sun but i think the front is coming along quite nice
Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2015 8:40 pm
ill remove the lines on the next update guys
Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 11:23 am
I like the addition of the sun. But how about removing the glare from the sun, from behind the main character? If the sun was in front of him, it would not be so light on his back. Another idea you may want to try, is adjusting the curves. It enhances the sun, and gives a more sun set/rise feel about it, as the sun is quite low in the sky? The only problem is, it takes away the bright fresh look you have gone for.
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Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2015 5:14 pm
Think the sun would be out of frame to the far left, judging by the very long shadows on the ground of the small party, and the highlights on the back mountains...
Which makes the one in post #9 look the most correct, I think.
Nice start Tron
Which makes the one in post #9 look the most correct, I think.
Nice start Tron